The sound of the boardwalk
Cracking, tenderly, as a spine
Against the hard wash
Of the late tide
Makes me think
That I had better
Get my feet
Out of the water
3.06.2012
Static 4
Lofty City Low is my poetry blog. I utilize it mostly for stream of consciousness writing exercises. The rawness of these writings supplies me with starting points for my creative works. Occasionally, I will post a fully-revised piece, looking for feedback. I hope you enjoy and connect with something I've put here. Feel free to comment. Thank you.
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I always loved reading your stuff in college (stories and poems). This poem has great sound and imagery. :)
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