If I'd known about your loss
I would have put my speech
To better use
And said something
A little more fitting
A little more caustic
Like salt on a wound
It would have been
Good for you
If only for a little
Great white pain
4.09.2013
Ahab
Lofty City Low is my poetry blog. I utilize it mostly for stream of consciousness writing exercises. The rawness of these writings supplies me with starting points for my creative works. Occasionally, I will post a fully-revised piece, looking for feedback. I hope you enjoy and connect with something I've put here. Feel free to comment. Thank you.
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